"Have you ever been in love?"- Read my short story! Feedback?

Your writing flows beautifully, and I was actually moved by what I read. Your story caused emotion, and that's what you want to strive for as a writer, so good job. And all your visuals were excellent - I could clearly picture what was going on. Just one thing though: I assume that both your characters are young in beginning of the story, and Allie only had a crush on Nathan for six weeks. I don't understand why she felt the need to commit suicide, since she was so young when Nathan died, six weeks is not a long time to like someone, they never actually dated and fifteen years should have been enough to get over it.